I love the animation soooo much!!!
But.. I feel like the narration threw it off.. The point of a good movie is to show, not tell. The things said could have been expressed by his actions. Like looking down at the water, that was a perfect way of explaining it. The title spoke of what the story is about. =D
don't get me wrong though! great work!
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